The sorest tounge ever

I crouched and jumped towards the easy

rocks, then it got an elephant load harder .

I crouched again then spring into action I

missed and then I smashed my tongue on a

 slippery,grey rock.I'm K.Oed and then the water

 gets a taste of my blood.I woke up to see Hamish.

I took another sip of the bloody bottle.I stood up 

and staggered over the river and in no time I'm back at camp.

I felt sore