Friday, February 19, 2010

Haiku poem

Birds flying everywhere

Beauteful birds everywhere

birds peaking on the the ground
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  1. Room 6March 13, 2010 at 3:43 PM

    go brandon!!!

    love your story... great work!!! :) :)



    from the bestest person HEAVENLY

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  2. AnonymousApril 9, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    thats 6,7,6 its supposed to be 5,7,5 you've added one extra sylabel (sp?) on the first and last line

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